Project Updates 2021 April 18

I’ve struggled to make much progress on my projects. Mostly due to a stretch of lethargy. I did make some progress though.

"Bright Freedom"

I came up with the idea for “Bright Freedom” about 12 years ago. Since then, I wrote several different drafts of a script. Then I abandoned that approach and tried to turn it into a novel. I went through several different versions of that. I abandoned the story altogether several times.

I ran into several different problems. Partly it was that the main character was a different gender, a different ethnic group, and a different career than me. I often felt that I was the wrong person to write the story. I also ran into trouble with the actual story. It started well, but I felt the resolution was weak, and of course I struggled with the middle section. I find it hard to come up with a middle and an end that would match the beginning.

Nevertheless, I kept going back to the story. It is almost as if the protagonist keeps pushing me to write her story. She is a strong woman, and I can’t really say no to her.

I have never shown anyone any of what I’ve written because I never felt that I had anything complete enough to share. I feel that I need to get some feedback before I can move forward.

I decided to write a treatment for the story. That would give me something that I can approach people on feedback for.

I made good progress on the treatment in my first session. But then, I got stymied on it again.

Nawmal Movie

I got a licence for Nawmal (https://www.nawmal.com/) a short time ago. I wanted to redo “The Barrier”, which I’d done with an earlier version of the program. I was a little intimidated at taking on such a large project, so I wanted to find a shorter project to start on before I got the licence.

I decided to do one based on a writing exercise I’d done for my writer’s group: “The Broken Attic”. It was fairly short, and I felt it would work well in Nawmal. However, I kept procrastinating on it, and I never got started.

More recently, I did a treatment and draft script titled “Speed Date” for my writer’s group.  It is about two people who meet at a speed dating event. There were some issues with it I would need to fix, but I decided to try doing it with Nawmal. In the past I’ve found that it can help me to write dialogue using Nawmal.

I used a new set of characters and sets that weren't in the earlier version. I found them quite good for the story. I was disappointed with the voices that come with Nawmal when I tested them. However, when I used them in the movie, I was quite impressed. They sounded much more natural than the earlier voices.

So far, I have just created a version of the movie based on the original script. Once I’m satisfied with that, I plan to start revising the dialogue. Already I can tell that I really need to develop more interesting things for the characters to talk about.

I decided to change the title from “Speed Date” to "Cupid's Assistant". I am intrigued by an alternative "Cupid's Minions" or maybe “The Minions of Cupid.” I always thought of the word minion as being vaguely sinister, but I think most people wouldn’t because of the cartoon characters.

I’ve never gone to a speed dating event, and I’m not likely to ever go on one. Someone in my writer’s group suggested that I find a movie with a speed dating scene to study. I'd rather try to find someone who has been to a speed dating event to hear what their experience is.

If you know anyone who has been to a speed dating event and would be willing to chat with me about their experience, please encourage them to get in touch with me.

 

 

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“The Magnificent River” Posted

I recently finished a short piece based on a writing exercise I did. I made some changes to the original exercise and posted it on my website.

You can read it at: https://dynamiclethargyfilms.ca/stories/the-magnificent-river/

A couple years ago I joined a script writer’s group. Every time we meet, we do a writing exercise. I thought some of the ones I’ve done could be worth sharing, but this is the first time I followed up on my plan.

The prompt for the exercise was a title: “The Magnificent River”. I always find it interesting how people will take the idea in very different directions.

I may go back and see if I can develop some of my other exercises to the point where I feel I can share them.

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