I’ve struggled to make much progress on my projects. Mostly
due to a stretch of lethargy. I did make some progress though.
"Bright Freedom"
I came up with the idea for “Bright Freedom” about 12 years
ago. Since then, I wrote several different drafts of a script. Then I abandoned
that approach and tried to turn it into a novel. I went through several
different versions of that. I abandoned the story altogether several times.
I ran into several different problems. Partly it was that the main
character was a different gender, a different ethnic group, and a different career
than me. I often felt that I was the wrong person to write the story. I also
ran into trouble with the actual story. It started well, but I felt the
resolution was weak, and of course I struggled with the middle section. I find
it hard to come up with a middle and an end that would match the beginning.
Nevertheless, I kept going back to the story. It is almost as
if the protagonist keeps pushing me to write her story. She is a strong woman,
and I can’t really say no to her.
I have never shown anyone any of what I’ve written because I
never felt that I had anything complete enough to share. I feel that I need to
get some feedback before I can move forward.
I decided to write a treatment for the story. That would give
me something that I can approach people on feedback for.
I made good progress on the treatment in my first session. But
then, I got stymied on it again.
Nawmal Movie
I got a licence for Nawmal (https://www.nawmal.com/) a short
time ago. I wanted to redo “The Barrier”, which I’d done with an earlier
version of the program. I was a little intimidated at taking on such a large
project, so I wanted to find a shorter project to start on before I got the
licence.
I decided to do one based on a writing exercise I’d done for
my writer’s group: “The Broken Attic”. It was fairly short, and I felt it would
work well in Nawmal. However, I kept procrastinating on it, and I never got
started.
More recently, I did a treatment and draft script titled “Speed
Date” for my writer’s group. It is about
two people who meet at a speed dating event. There were some issues with it I would
need to fix, but I decided to try doing it with Nawmal. In the past I’ve found
that it can help me to write dialogue using Nawmal.
I
used a new set of characters and sets that weren't in the earlier version. I found
them quite good for the story. I was disappointed with the voices that come
with Nawmal when I tested them. However, when I used them in the movie, I was
quite impressed. They sounded much more natural than the earlier voices.
So
far, I have just created a version of the movie based on the original script.
Once I’m satisfied with that, I plan to start revising the dialogue. Already I
can tell that I really need to develop more interesting things for the
characters to talk about.
I decided to
change the title from “Speed Date” to "Cupid's Assistant". I am intrigued
by an alternative "Cupid's Minions" or maybe “The Minions of Cupid.” I
always thought of the word minion as being vaguely sinister, but I think most
people wouldn’t because of the cartoon characters.
I’ve never gone to a speed dating event, and I’m not likely to
ever go on one. Someone in my writer’s group suggested that I find a movie with
a speed dating scene to study. I'd rather try to find someone who has been to a
speed dating event to hear what their experience is.
If you know anyone who has been to a speed dating event and
would be willing to chat with me about their experience, please encourage them
to get in touch with me.
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